So I’m sorry if I couldn’t get anything good, I’m very very new to writing and tried my best, if there is anything you suggest, such as formatting the talking, it felt very weird, and I wasn’t sure half the time if it was right
. She then (I guess) presumed it was a figment of her imagination, and left without another word. Once again, this is my first story, I don’t know If I should quit it, fix it or something like that so please tell me what I got wrong, what I can fix and if I should have done something differently
. . My right hand was stroking the bottom half of his manhood alternating as my lips took it in, and out, and in, and out
So I’m sorry if I couldn’t get anything good, I’m very very new to writing and tried my best, if there is anything you suggest, such as formatting the talking, it felt very weird, and I wasn’t sure half the time if it was right
. She then (I guess) presumed it was a figment of her imagination, and left without another word. Once again, this is my first story, I don’t know If I should quit it, fix it or something like that so please tell me what I got wrong, what I can fix and if I should have done something differently
. . My right hand was stroking the bottom half of his manhood alternating as my lips took it in, and out, and in, and out
Kayden Kross, Nicole D'Angelo etc. Nude - Blue Dream (2013)
Half way, maybe a little more, through my orgasm the Married Guy had stood up and was kissing me again, He hadn't swallowed my cum and now it was mixing in with both our mouths as we kissed again.
. The strong sweet musk from her cunt drove me mad. In that darkness itself I can see her breasts clearly
I had gotten a great hard on till now.
. ” One of them says in their deep Russian accent
He’s a big guy and already carries a firearm. “Hey David, what can I do for our TV hero?” He asks
. She figured that since the assisstant was newer she should serve him first, and leaned in to engulf the head of his swollen member with her lips
So I’m sorry if I couldn’t get anything good, I’m very very new to writing and tried my best, if there is anything you suggest, such as formatting the talking, it felt very weird, and I wasn’t sure half the time if it was right
. She then (I guess) presumed it was a figment of her imagination, and left without another word. Once again, this is my first story, I don’t know If I should quit it, fix it or something like that so please tell me what I got wrong, what I can fix and if I should have done something differently
. . My right hand was stroking the bottom half of his manhood alternating as my lips took it in, and out, and in, and out
Kayden Kross, Nicole D'Angelo etc. Nude - Blue Dream (2013)